My Subconscious Subworld

My subconscious sub world has a mind of it’s own by patsy edelmann when it’s crowded outside, it still feels alone with holes of rectangles and circles within it reshapes triangles, so they can fit in it listens so closely to what it receives then hears what it wants and already believes
my subconscious sub world has survival food stored guns for protection and self latching doors and now lie detectors solve the need to trust if one cares to enter this test is a must it’s not paranoia it’s just being smart to head off attacks before they can start
my subconscious sub word has known poe’s and freud’s it’s learned life is best if it simply avoids understanding or asking what fellow man thinks it’s decided man’s wisdom quite frankly stinks so it creates a system that works best for it it prefers the fruit, does not like the pit
my subconscious sub world heard a knock on the door the voice had authority like none before though it held power it was mild as a dove my subconscious screamed danger, my heart reached for love my sub world was quaking, it’s guns cocked and aimed then drew back from shooting when He called my name
my subconscious sub world ran a check on it’s wall they were crumbling too fast with each of His calls it called for the mortar of self will to repair any breaks, then it heard His voice say “Yes I care” and it searched for more bricks of resentment to fill any voids, then it ceased, a peace made it still
My subconscious sub world offered “Lord, please come in please excuse all this mess, please forgive all my sin” He brought some rectangles and circles with Him I’d no need to reshape they fit perfectly in my heart was so glad, how can I believe? no mess did he see, He only saw…Me Words and art PatsyP tagTag Photo

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I can totally relate to what you are trying to convey across. Sometimes, we overthink over nothing whilst at other times, we blank out on everything. Our minds work wonders so we need to control it very well in order for it to work for us instead of vice versa.